that was entertaining, thanks for sharing! How many different endings are there to this twine story? I failed in my attempt but was a good ride..nicely written though
Hey man, Just checked it out. Was entertaining indeed.
Just a small thing, if you make choices in a certain order the narrative doesn't flow very well. For example, without giving spoilers, something is revealed, thereafter you can make a choice that puts you back to a point before that something was revealed again.
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that was entertaining, thanks for sharing! How many different endings are there to this twine story?
I failed in my attempt but was a good ride..nicely written though
Glad you enjoyed it, there are two endings :)
Just checked it out. Was entertaining indeed.
Just a small thing, if you make choices in a certain order the narrative doesn't flow very well. For example, without giving spoilers, something is revealed, thereafter you can make a choice that puts you back to a point before that something was revealed again.
Other than that, pretty sweet :)
Thanks for the feedback :)
Just copy the latest file into your Public and go to the Dropbox website and "Copy the public link..."