Pieter Visser's Art

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• Ratel

  5:38pm 16 Dec 2014

  I like it a lot, is it just me or does some of your work have a Starcraft type feel?

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• pieter

  6:33pm 16 Dec 2014

  @LittleBear Yes, the crystals in the above background were inspired by Starcraft. There's even a Protoss reference in the stage with an area marked for "Additional Pylons" :D
• pieter

  7:42am 19 Dec 2014

  Quick character design I did last weekend.
  
  

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• wogan

  8:11am 19 Dec 2014

  @pieter I'm gonna have to start saving up so I can get some art from you some day!

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• Cheatsi

  9:56am 5 Jan 2015

  SHAPA this is really good man, :)
• Boysano

  7:03pm 19 Jan 2015

  Love your stuff man!
• Steamhat

  10:53am 21 Jan 2015

  OH HELL YES! a lot of great stuff here, the sprite work ships are exquisite, and awesomely practical, I would like to propose a few criticism from the game asset perspective.
  The sprite work lacks a good focal point on each element, meaning that if this was on a screen in game, there would be difficult translation for what is important to the player, There's a reason people make guns glow or 'weak points' massive and unsubtle, the elements should have values that are very quickly identified by a quick view, this is why we don't write black text on a grey background. But literally the ships are the best of what I see here.
  
  The environmental tilesets are super sweet, however they are possibly too detailed, a ground texture should not have severe contrast in colours as they are literally distracting to more important elements, like characters, as the crystal images show, there's too much noise around the crystals to give the crystals a strong presence. As mentioned, the skill is there, but it needs fine tuning to be used in game most efficiently.
  
  And now's that awkward time when I look at character designs, Look I am a really difficult sell when it comes to anything inspired by anime, but this is truly because it makes some lazy habits in design. I'm not going to waste my time on stylistic aspects and the problems with anatomy or whatnot because we have Super deformed game characters amongst our most beloved (mario, limbo kid) But these characters scream generic and lazy and lack basic rules of identity...
  Dota 2 Art guide
  Firstly: take a look at the dota 2 art guide for the workshop.
  silhouettes are important, and these are all the basic body structure with tiny details added to them sticking out, there's a reason Cloud strife has MASSIVE hair, MASSIVE POINTY SWORD and stands next to wide body'd tiny legged Barrett in character lineups, they stand out as unique characters on the most terrible of monitors.
  About those tiny details: they only make further steps harder when it comes to animation and making assets when every angle has finicky design extras on them that add very little.
  and lesson 2: adding visual interest, Values are super cool and really easy to get into, tonally I'm seeing hair and dresses at the same tone and characters with grey hair wearing grey clothes, this translates prettimuch not at all... same rules as apply to environments except you want to be loud there, not more subtle. Makes for a game looking great.
  
  Sorry if that's brutal, I love seeing more artists, but always feel we need to be kept in check amongst all these programmers who most of the time are a little clueless on what works and what doesn't. Keep up the work! and feel free to rip into my work if I can improve certain aspects.

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• pieter

  7:41am 10 Nov 2015

  To all the wonderful members of the MGSA community who have fuelled and inspired me on my journey to becoming a videogame designer, thank you. I have gained so many insights from all the members who tirelessly take hours and days to write comprehensive post replies and articles (Thanks @Steamhat for the detailed critique :D). It's a philosophy of paying it forward, and I always wanted to contribute to this in some small way.
  
  I have put together a "Shoot em Up Starter Pack" for all MGSA users containing pretty much everything you would need to create a Shoot em Up game. It is free for use in non-commercial projects, so prototypes, game jams, personal projects etc, go nuts. I can't wait to see what you guys and gals cook up :)
  
  Download the pack here:
  MGSA Shoot em Up Starter Pack
  
  
  
  

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• garethf

  1:48pm 10 Nov 2015

  Awesome pack, man, thanks for sharing!
• pieter

  10:23am 14 Nov 2015

  To all the young artists out there, practise till your good becomes better, and your better becomes your best.
  Practise everyday, even if it's just for 10 minutes, and you WILL improve. Keep that fire inside you going, only you can make your art.
  
  (Then: 2007 -> Now: 2015) Slow but steady progress ;)
  

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• NickWiggill

  11:50am 17 Nov 2015 edited 11:56am 17 Nov 2015

  I prefer your original style! (except the explosion) - cleaner = better
  
  Leaves & rocks added to my design reference - very nice shading work.

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• Elyaradine

  12:36pm 17 Nov 2015

  There's a design trope that gets mentioned pretty often I think. It has a bunch of different names, but I think I've most often heard it referred to as the "70/30 rule", and basically says that anything you do (like using a pattern, or a colour, or value, or whatever), should either be used sparingly (the ~30%) or in the majority (~70%), but not midway and not over the entire thing. I don't think the numbers are important, but the idea of having contrast I think is pretty crucial. If nothing is detailed, it can look flat. If everything is detailed, it can look noisy. If parts are relatively clean and others are noisy, but the combination isn't 50:50, then it's more pleasing.
  
  I find design "rules" to be super thumb-sucky, but it's something that works quite well practically, even if the justification seems to change a bit depending on whom you're talking to. :P
  
  I really like the vibrant colours in your work, but I do find that when I look at a screen of your sprites it's very noisy, and if you offered areas of very low detail, it'd make your detail work look better. I don't agree that cleaner is always better (sometimes it just looks cheap), but I think that having some cleaner areas would be more appealing.
  
  Keep it up! :)

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• NickWiggill

  1:37pm 17 Nov 2015 edited 1:44pm 17 Nov 2015

  @pieter, for you, right now, less is more.
  
  Looking at your characters: the best by far is the girl-in-ghost-outfit & guy-with-shades. Sober palette choices, good tonal contrast, and most of all, solid areas of non-detail. Poses and anatomical relief also make a difference, but not as much as the sculpted nature of these characters. The worst is the guy with twin holsters: too much linework / variation on skin, jeans. This immediately detracts from the impression of form that the viewer gets. It makes the eye work harder.
  
  Some of your large ships have wonderful form, but it is not as evident as it would be, were they less detailed.
  
  So - you have no problem with creating massive amounts of detail when you need to, that's great. The next step in improving your style is to learn to scale that tendency back toward simplicity and elegance.

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• pieter

  4:46pm 17 Nov 2015

  @Elyaradine @NickWiggill Thanks for providing the fresh pair of eyes I needed :D
  
  There was something that bothered me the whole time I was making them too. I knew it was a contrast thing, but I thought that I would just make the pallet more contrasted, but that didn't seem to solve it. But after reading your critiques it just became so clear, I need to vary my details to help create contrast and areas of interest. Currently your eye doesn't know where to focus.
  
  I'm busy working on the next set of sprites, and will give extra attention to where I provide details to help provide interest and contrast.
  
  Thanks again for the keen insights! Level up, level up!
  
  Ps, I'm working on a new background tile (Crystal / Mushroom Caves theme). Too busy as well?
  

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• NickWiggill

  5:26pm 17 Nov 2015 edited 6:40pm 17 Nov 2015

  Re the prisms, possibly soften the edges with manual anti-aliasing / sub-pixel hints? - especially as you go so small with some of them, to help the smooth/slick impression of these glassy objects (this may however go against your personal pixelling style - it all depends - some pixellers disdain certain techniques). The only other thing I can suggest to quickly improve solidity is to use fewer diagonal gloss lines across the surface of each, or merge existing, as this may reduce visual fragmentation overall.
  
  What you did so well with the shale-like rocks, the shadowing of elements underneath, might see minor application here by applying them as a cut-out from the gloss lines, suggesting that light doesn't fall there. Taller prisms could easily be indicated by more of those dark horizontal lines you have at the top of each prism at the moment, indicating a greater degree of exposed crystal above the surface. Looks like the Giant's Causeway in amethyst! ;)
  
  P.S. When I look at the nice crunchy pixels of this image I am very tempted to scale up x2 or x3 and rework from there for finer lines, while keeping the tanks the original size. It would seem to do justice to the crystals.

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